Teacher feedback

Mum shoots-

Teenage boy - wants to be left alone- 

Comedy Spot-

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ANjenc4W1_Q&safe=truehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ANjenc4W1_Q&safe=true

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cU1boBOJu4o&safe=truehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cU1boBOJu4o&safe=true

Argument -

Boy has plans for the summer-

Him- talking to friends-

Him in a cinema with a friend

him at an arcade with a friend

him and friend playing football

girls walking past him and friend watching-

Mum coming into his room-

saying- 

cousin is coming to stay - Mum has to work-

He is your responsibility-

what are you talking about - 

CHANGE THE SONG

Shots of -

boy arriving-

boy looking at house

cut to front on of the boy-

Song change 

ACT 3 Chaos ensues

boy making mess

boy punching 

them in the cinema

boy saying he wet himself

boy play football

boy in cinema

boy in food restaurant

boy as girl catcher 

These ideas can be put into my trailer,